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It's a shame you put in the unnecessary full stops as this would be an excellent piece of writing if it was just one sentence. The commas are fine, but I think you can safely drop the full stops.
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i do my best to try and not show off and just keep things casual and unfussy. i have no desire in me to make anyone feel bad about anything and i sometimes lack an understanding of what people think is showing off and what offends them. that said ive no desire to talk to you and think you a cruel uncaring dis honest person taking advantage of people and harassing them in general so please leave me alone. you know what the ip number is so please dont address me again